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Christmas Remembered

Just like Scrooge I remember the years
they fly through my mind like beautiful birds.
Enchanted memories of laughter and fun
family traditions always re-run.
Happy repetitions no need for a change
the food and the presents and hilarious games.

Closing my eyes the pictures come alive
a family busy as bees in a hive.
As children we hunted and rummaged for gifts
but Mom was too clever, she had plenty of tricks.
I remember the tree, the smell of the pine
and Christmas cards all strung up in a line.

Mom’s fresh baking would waft through the house
naughty children crept in to steal it quiet as a mouse.
With hands that were freezing and toes turned to ice
we'd trudge from shop to shop for the right price.
Money was short and family many
so Mom had to watch every single penny.

A home full of music, that’s no real surprise
our carol singing would bring tears to your eyes.
Then when all was quiet we would go off to our bed
and dream of Father Christmas, but it was Dad instead.
Next morning we’d wake early, finding presents galore
then go off to church, Our Saviour, baby Jesus to adore.

Such happy memories I have of the past
a wonderful treasure that forever will last.
Now history is repeated each and every year
with my own children who to me are so dear.
So if you are lonely and sad at this time
come visit my home and live out this rhyme.

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I love Christmas

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  • ecrivain01
    November 11
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    Not what I'm looking for ...

    here, but nice anyway. Good luck in the other contest.


    • Cherrylv
      November 11
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      ecrivain01

      Sorry I must have misread the contest notes. I'll remove it then

      Cherry xxx


  • darlee77 gold member
    November 1

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    This sounds like the Christmas we have. Family, friends, sometimes a couple of strays, lol. We all join in and have a great time. This really brought back wonderful memories. Excellent poem.

    • Cherrylv
      November 2
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      darlee77

      Thanks so much Darlee for stopping by and leaving such a lovely comment it is wonderful to hear you have happy memories and fun at Christmas like me

      Cherry xxx


  • cazzy71
    October 26

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    Excellant

    This is fabulous,the rhyming couplets are so natural,so unforced and the sparkle this poem gives out is engaging and infectious. I thank you for taking the time to enter and give you my best regards.

    • Cherrylv
      October 26
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      cazzy71

      Thank you so much for the lovely comment Cazzy
      I love Christmas so the poem was a joy to write

      Cherry xxx

  • Bruce silver member
    October 25

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    Dear Cherry, This is absolutely lovely! I have wonderful memories of Christmas past as well, even if the rest of the year wasn't so great. You have painted us a beautiful portrait of a time well worth remembering!

    • Cherrylv
      October 26
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      Bruce

      Hello Bruce I'm glad you have wonderful memories of Christmas too, it is soooo sad when people don't thank you for your lovely comment. I hope you have a great Christmas this year too.

      Cherry xxx


  • MizzConstrued
    October 25

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    LOVELY!!

    What a wonderful share! Shows just how big your heart is!
    Christmas, Holiday Memories in general, oh the stories, the laughter, even if intermingled with tears, this poems takes the commercialism right out of Christmas!
    Wonderfully done!
    (I'll bring an angelfood cake.....)

    • Cherrylv
      October 25
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      MizzConstrued

      Giggles thank you so much dear, I LOVE Christmas so bring your angelfood cake and join in the fun, the more the merrier

      Cherry xxx

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