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In this Spoonful --




Highlighted bananas sing a florescent song of what it feels like to be an aphrodisiac, ambushed and stolen from an unheard of country in the far east during a strange attempt of guerrilla warfare ;

Tangy oranges grown between the tropical rain forests in Costa Rica are smaller than Runts to allow my tongue to curl around a few at a time, squeezing the insides out for a more delectable taste ;

Seedless slices of watermelons aren’t big enough to hide the bulging bunches of blueberries and antioxidant raspberries collected from wild bushes across the world ;


it’s no wonder the silly rabbit tries to steal these
delicious, foreign fruity pleasures from kids' cereal bowls ;




[  even though rabbits are supposed to like vegetables  ]




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Author notes

prompt: cereal;
Trix

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  • Pheonix
    October 26

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    I enjoyed reading this and found myself with a smiling at the end. Wonderful job and congrats for honorable mention.


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    October 26

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    LOL
    Silly wabbit
    they had betta be careful
    It's Rabbit Season
    catch a rabbit my bowl
    and he will be on my grill
    Just kidding everyone
    don't call an Animals Activist
    Very funny
    Wish you the best in the contest
    David


  • Stickboy
    October 25

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    hee hee silly rabit Trix aren't just for kids anymore lol made me smile when reading what those poor fruit go thru just to make my tummy happy. Best of luck in the contest
    Sean