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Slave

Slave to Care
Caught up in uncertainties
Regularly going along
To the beat of the day.

Down swoops reality
And knocks me to the ground
Here engulfed in anxiety

Slave to care
Abandoned at will
Battling with lost memories
Negating my chores.

Pining for what was
And in return I have what is.
Blindly I ventured forth
Unbeknown
Of the stresses and toils

Slave to care

Navigating
Is hard.

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  • Kevin31
    November 11

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    GREAT

    Wow the rawness of this write is evident, gosh this is deep and just so raw and painful, Caring for some-one is harder then most of us can imagine. I take my hat off to you Ann.


    • Ann45 gold member
      November 12
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      kevin31

      Aye it's raw, and painful yet questions. thanks for stopping by to read this and thanks for your comments


  • Denerica
    October 25

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    Can relate to this very well, never really knowing if we are coming or going, and to break free of every day grind.Emotional, can feel the tension. Well done. Blessings.

    • Ann45 gold member
      October 29
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      Denerica

      I thinks most of us can relate to this huni. Thanks for dropping by and leaving your nice comment. Hope all is well