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Music To My Heart.

Your voice slowly speaks
I latch onto every lasting word
so sacred in every way,
the most beautiful sound I've ever heard.
Music of happiness
fills me with love and embrace
I fill to the brim with your warmth and comfort
the everlasting smile upon your face.
Playing like a melody
the amazing atmosphere colours my mind
every word you speak; is music to my ear's
the loving world of two hearts combined.

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69. Music To My Heart.

I hope you like it. All comments and thoughts on this poem are greatly appreciated!

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  • moonlitanime
    November 15
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    every word you have written is music to my ears your words are so pure but so sad never wanting to let your voice stop so your lover knows you are still with him. This is the most romantic poem I have read in a long time it is so hard to captour the pure inoccents that makes love so special and you have captoued the single most important factor of love.

    Well done for the uplifting write

  • You write so beautifully, and I can feel that it comes straight from your heart. You did an excellent job with this piece, thank you so much for entering.

  • wow chick this is so beautiful. great write


  • Failed-Dreamer
    October 25

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    Oh my gosh, this is absolutely beautiful.

  • Topnotchsy
    October 25

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    This is a really lovely and sweet piece. Best of luck in the contest with it.


  • Naznomarn
    October 25

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    Aww! So sweet ^-^
    Someone out there's luckeh!

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