Reflections surge in Autumn bold, in hues that range from reds to golds,
across the earth a blazing sight, cascading in dance of delight.
As night descends with cooling air, these colours warmth cannot compare,
for this is Winter's prelude call, yet Fall's excitement does enthrall.
Such beauty reaches out its arms, a time when nature shows her charms,
her reign reaches across the skies that resonates with all our sighs.
To bask within this flaming scene, where earth is dressed in lights supreme,
in wondrous calm surrounds the world, where peace and laughter can unfurl.
A lullaby rings out so soft, as tender breezes sway aloft,
long walks in twilight senses joy, from daily grind a fine decoy.
And finally the sun will set and leave each heart slightly bereft,
yearning for the light of day, when freshly painted hopes convey.
Author notes
Photo by Bob Jagendorf
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A contest entry
- Autumn Inspiration by StormGoddess.
400 points, ended November 1, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN
Congatulations on your win!!
You have written a superbe and truly beautifully worded poem. Your words were pure music to my soul.
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Wow! This is excellent. The flow and rhyme are superb. The imagery is astounding. You've painted a beautiful picture upon your page.
Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm -
...Wow.
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OH
I like this write. Of course I love Autumn. Wish I had some trees. Good stuff Poet.
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So characteristic of you to capture it all in the hues and colors and the sounds of the season. I was just thinking how beautiful this time of year is and you put it all there so perfectly for all to see. Bravo!
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You take my breath away with your imagery and what a glorious picture.
Good Luck in the comp.
Love Lu x
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Another breathtaking Autumn piece you have penned. Your imagery outshines the picture, which is beautiful as well.. awesome read young lady!
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Excellent
Oh my what a beautiful write. You took the reader into the middle of the picture. Such a great creation. Many blessings in the contest
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