Aries the Ram
Stands lone and proud
Grazing on green domain
Wearing his Crown of Horns
A contest entry
- BIG HORN SHEEP HAIKU by Swan song.
900 points, ended November 7, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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this is nice and it rhymes more like a quatrain then a haiku but well done
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Hmmmm...
..... I am not sure what to think of this one. I am not a haiku person for the most part, but I know that this one does not fit the Kaiku format which should 5 sylables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 5 in the third might want to rewrite this one for the contest. I always give credit where credit is due and kudos to you for attempting this challenging format!
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Sorry I only wrote what I saw
i am afraid I'm not into the technicalities
I thought it was just for the love of writing what you see/feel
when you have a picture prompt not an exam
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