Somewhere over the rainbow
beyond the naked eye .
There's a place one day my
soul shall go . On silver wings
there I shall fly ..
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A Kingdoms there ,'tis a heaven so
divine . The beauty and it's splendor
are beyond all the realms of space
and time .
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In this heavenly light , dark clouds
are never there . Only dazzling clouds
of snowy white . As you feel His love
flowing gently through the air .
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Somewhere over the rainbow , there
in the yonder sky when I am called
one day . I'll tell my friends good by .
I'll find my way to heaven then and
on silver wings , there I shall fly ...
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Author notes
Contest : prompt , Some where over the rainbow
A contest entry
- Some Where Over The RainBow (Big Points) by SamanthaSam.
1100 points, ended October 25, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Brilliant
"Some where over the rainbow
beyond the naked eye .
There's a place one day my
soul shall go . On silver wings
there I shall fly .."
This should be part of the Astronaut's Handbook, not that scientist could find with the Hubble Telescope the splendors of a Kingdom not of this Earth known only in the heart.
Howard
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Congratulations on the Emerald Cup!!
This heartwarming poem is very sentimental, and seemingly carefree, a soul resigned to go and be there, "somewhere over the rainbow" 
I love the presentation; brilliantly colorful imagery makes this a masterpiece in my view. Good work, Poet!! 
Peace & hugs,
Cyn
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Good morning Cyn !! Well I am happy to
hear you liked this poem ! Thank you for
your wonderful inspiring comment !!
You have great day !
Big hugs * friend Easy -
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It IS a radiant beauty!!
I'm hoping you also have a great day, Easy!! Take care...
Peace & Hugs,
Cyn
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I love the heading of this piece and the way you used it throughout the poem was wonderful. Love the story that tells where you will go and your peacefulness with that situation. This had a great beat to it, like it could have been used in a song. A light hearted look at the kingdom beyond where all shall go one day...hopefully. lol!!!!! I am going to bookmark this because it is a peace that really gently touches me and gives me something to smile about. Congratulations on your HM.
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A nice breezy ethereal feel here. You make the moment saying goodbye to friends seem happy and safe here.
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Thank you Steve ! Nice of you to
stop by today , I appreciate your
comment and support !! Take care ,
Best regards , friend Easy
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How truly beautiful and touching!
I always love it when poetry can reach inside and bring a tear...
Thank you
Lynda
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Hi Lynda !! Thank you for stopping by
and for your wonderful comment !!
You have a great day , take care .
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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I like the hopeful tone of this poem, and it seems to go very well with the picture. May we all find our silver wings! Lita
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Hi Lita !! Thank you for your kind words !
I appreciate it a lot !! I'm glad you enjoyed
my little poem ! Take care ,
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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This poen expresses bliss...euphoria...and tranquility....
All heavenly..
Thanks
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Aww thank you Anya !! I appreciate
your lovely comment !!
Take care ,
Best wishes & hugs , friend Easy
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I love the picture and your poem goes great with it and has so much hope and feeling to make all want to feel something
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Aww thank you Tanya !! Your
words are always so inspiring !!
Best always & hugs ,
Friend Easy
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Amazing!!
Very touching and beautiful in its simplicity!!
The concept of Heaven is universal and you're poem captured the beauty that awaits people there.
Congratulations on the HM!!
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Hi Sarah !! Great hearing from you !
Thank you for visiting today & I
appreciate your lovely comment too !
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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Congratulations on the Emerald Cup!!
I think this poem is wonderfully inspirational!! Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts with all of us, and keep it flowing...
Peace & Hugs,
xx Cyn xx
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Hi Cyn !!
Thank you for the kind words that you say !
I appreciate it a lot !! Y'all have a great day !!
Best always & big hugs , Friend Easy
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This is a beautiful and touching poem. The picure you picked is perfect for it too. The poem brought tears to my eyes because its message is so sweet and loving and promising. Nice to have this to look forward to someday when we say goodbye to our earth friends. Just don't be in any hurry for I am just getting to know you and you are too sweet to leave yet. I love this poem and its imagery. Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest.
Hugs,
Sam I Am
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Thank you Sam I Am , for your wonderful
comment ! I had to do some last minute
changes and find the right pic ..
You have a great day !!
Best wishes , Friend Easy
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Awww Easy this is beautiful there's a wonderful place waiting beyond the rainbow for all of us I'm sure!
Cherry xxx
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Hi Cherry !! Thank you so much
for your lovely comment !!
Great hearing from you today !
Hope you are having a nice weekend !
Take care , Best wishes & hugs ,
Friend Easy -
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Ez Writer
No problem hope you are too!
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Oh Easy how deeply beautiful this is! Though I hope it's a loooong time before you see those pearly gates. I love this, you've outdone yourself. Best of luck young man.
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Hi Linda !! Naaa i'm kicking back not
in any rush Lol // Hey thank you for
your great comment & you have a
great Sunday !!
Best always & hugs , Friend Easy
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Stunning Easy My dear friend for yours is a beautiful take on this picture Hugs always Angel♥
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Thank you Angel !! Nice hearing from
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♥ your so welcome hun
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