soliloquies whispered
in errant drops of tears
her sighs so delicate
aches ripped tenderly
from empty arms
and shudders of despair
dance in despondent rhythm
it was all for nothing....
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Deep, intense and I love this poem that you've written. I used to think the same thing about so many things in my life, that it was all for nothing.. that's how life felt to me then, and I thought that things would never change. but alas they did and my perspective on things have changed.. but I still have days that aI feel like this..
this poem has a deeper side to it, one that I may have not experienced before. the imagery is fanastic and vivid.. to read this and ponder a bit, the emotional piece is heart wrenching and very intensly personalized for me anyway. You have a gift to be able to draw the reader into your world and bring them with you along a journey, no matter how painful it is or not.
Fantastic poem
Good luck
Kat
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Love this hun
the dance breathes the waves of rhythm in such a sad way
truly beautiful sadness
best wishes and good luck
Julie x -
this is stunning.... achingly sad but so beautifully written.
best of luck!
Tasha
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Poet
I often wonder. Do we really understand our humam nature. r is there just a need to possess. And then, not really seeing, we become part nothing to others. Just thoughts I gathered from your fine write.
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