the soul is light
illuminating
like water
cleansing
like the forest
wild and free
look out for it
today is the day
beautiful souls that brighten the way
beleive in it as it comes in many forms
beyond all norms
can raise flames and storms
the soul is real
it can feel
it can even steal
the soul is there always
the soul is true life
and the soul is what stays
Author notes
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A contest entry
- The Concept of Soul by Sweet Water.
1500 points, ended November 14, 26 entries
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Comments
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Why make work from ease. I love the simplicty of the words you've chose here poet. I don't know that the soul is as complicated as we wish it to be. I love the thought process placed here. Excellent! I wish you well in the challenge.
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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Nice imagery in the first six lines. The rhyme is a little simplistic though.
Thanks for entering, good luck!
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