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© Musing

Vibrantly tip-toeing

Across the intricately connective construct of my mind

Smiling at fantasies beyond reality's grasp

I fade away into pure bliss of wishful wanderings, my "feet" take me away

Galloping steadily, not going anywhere fast, not wanting to

To only stay there, nestled within the crevasses

 

I dream of you, as we hold one another so tight, to take thine breath away

Speaking fathoms of your beauty

Impending emotions rushing to the forefront

Your being having an orbital aura of charismatic depths

I would be "unhinged" to unhitch myself from you

I awaken, never being asleep, you are gone

Taken aback by reality

Until next time my love

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 25

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    loves song sings of beauty!

    Love & blessings

    Rend


  • AngelicDreams
    October 25

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    It is funny the way it is, I don't want to butt in your poetry but I think it'll be better without the "WTF!! lol"

    Personal opinion!!!

    I love it.


    • Archangel Knight gold member
      October 25
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      No you are right, I put that there for humor... but I was planning on taking it out........ it's gone now