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Down Under

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It's a Fog Fog Foggy day
Here down under's way
Stretching Oor the wae
Oot in plain view,

Fer Ye today.

Creeping Blanket o'r mist
Which Covers Our Line of sight
Tis thought this mist
It has real Life Just
Take a peek and see it stretch

Here across Our Land
Here down under's wae.

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  • Kevin31
    November 11

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    EERIE

    Aww, Sorry but I disagree with the HM, This deserved more, but that's my opinion. Love the Scots Lilt to this It's what sets the scene to the Pic Prompt.


    • Ann45 gold member
      November 12
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      kevin31

      Hey behave, I am glad to get any kind of trophy. Plus it's also about entering, one does not always have to win to feel a winner. thanks for your support though


  • rbruce gold member
    November 6

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    I like the wee bit of a Scots accent placed in this poem. And I am so pleased that the 'blanket of mist' won't be back until next winter.


    • Ann45 gold member
      November 6
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      rbruce

      Hi huni, hope all is well with you. thanks for the HM, glad you liked this. thanks for the contest huni.


  • condor gold member
    November 1

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    This is realy really good and I especially love how you gave it a scitsh lilt to it and made it sound eerie. The mist in this picture fitted well with your words. I wish you the very best in the contest.


    • Ann45 gold member
      November 6
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      condor

      Hi Huni, thaks for dropping by, glad you liked this, thanks for your comments. Hope all is well with you

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