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Sun never rises.
Deeper to look in to our promises.
You'll only find pity.
Living life in the yesterday

Do we even feel the doubt.
Do the dreams hold these seams or does it help in this eternal wasting away.
Is their anyway to drift over what was felt.

We drift down.

Awake in the darkness.

All because of the life we left behind us

How did we get this far.
Now all I have is dreams in the stars.

I can get anything we need.
I can be anything you need.
Now we walk alone together.
Close your eyes to feel like your mine.
Know what it is to be blind.
All the mistakes have cause such catastrophes, but you never felt a thing at all.

Lose the hope we had and dream of the darkness.

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dunno its just in my head

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  • eraced
    October 29

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    deep. beautiful, like the hand that reaches inside and plays with your heart.
    It seems like there is a whole world laying awake in the darkness,but your always their alone.

    not promising to make sense.~erAced~