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I guess it was time
To revisit this place again
I used to spend hours..
Days..
Weeks, actually,
In this dim place
It was here
That nothing revolved around the sun
It was a person
And even though
I was a person too
I was orbiting around them
Like everything else was

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  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    October 25

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    hmmmm...very interesting...I like how you don't really explain what it is you are talking about specificaly. You leave it open to interpretation for the reader. Very nice!! More please...Thanks for sharing.
    peace & light,
    Kendal


  • TheStupidLamb
    October 25
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    *Raises an eyebrow*