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A Dance in Time (Oddiquain swirl)


Swirl
twist and turn
around and around
never stop spinning like a top
revolving forever
spin and dip
dance
feel the music
let it take your soul
moving within endlessly
drifting dancing feet
unwatched clock
time
never ending
slowing for moments
then gliding onward smoothly
unconscious meander
through life's door
flow

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  • ubercrazygirl gold member
    October 25

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    nicely written, I enjoyed the way you portray the moments in our life that can come and go without notice. Thank you for entering.