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i loved you so

I loved you so!
You played with my emotions like it was a game.
Little do you know things will never be the same,
Tonight i broke down feeling very alone,
Just me and the blade no one else was home,
I called you crying, told u i loved you then hung up the phone,
u raced to my house just a minute to late,
Found me lying in blood my heart had no rate,
you glaced over in tears as you saw my last note,
And this is what i wrote,
"I loved you so you never knew my heart was broke because of you" 

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  • The Devil18
    October 28
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    this is sad but good nice work