Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Tend to the Heart(Tetractys)

Tend
to heart
not to mind
like a newborn
waiting for the love only mother gives

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Storminbrenda silver member
    October 25

    Edit | Reply
    Awwwww hon how sweet a write and so true I love hugging kids mine get fed up of them so throw them around everywhere lol and newborn smell nothing like it dont you just wish you could bottle it you deserve a big hug but i promised myself I wouldnt go mad and hug everyone to pieces but im soo tempted lol xxx


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    October 24

    Edit | Reply
    Lovely piece
    Power in brevity is very cool
    and you have shown that power here
    I like the form as well
    I always think of it as the "Dinosaur" form
    Tetractys; sounds like a dinosaur to me
    Keep on penning

    David


    • whyspr gold member
      October 24
      Edit | Reply
      ::laughing:: Yeah it does sound like a dino doesn't it? You know sheltered? he taught me a few forms and I gave it a shot. This is old stuff, so I figured it was ok to put it here as long as I didnt say it was a new poem.