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If Not For You

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If Not For You I would not know
What real true love really meant
I would never feel this inner peace
I could not be  happy or content

If Not For You I would never feel
The pleasures and thrills of  romance
I would miss the bliss and craziness
Of love's sweet special dance

I need to feel your tender touch
I have to hear your  beautiful voice
No other one could take your place
You are simply it my hearts rejoice

If Not For You I would be adrift
I do not know what I would do
I would be searching for my other half
Incomplete I would be If Not For You



Author notes

I love a man with all my heart but we are so far apart with him being in America and myself in Scotland.

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  • Joshuavk
    1 day ago
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    Ahh a nice poem indeed of impossible love. Rhyming is good but I find the flow somewhat lacking, still, a great poem.

    Cheers, Joshua.


  • InRain
    November 25
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    Absolutely lovely. I feel all that you are saying. The impulse of love and the longing. Well done


  • Daughter Of Night
    November 5

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    white rose wolf

    Aww i liked reading this it cute and sweet you wrote your heart feelings to this persong good write and good luck in my contets

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    October 27
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    Your love shines through each word, and is most beautiful to see, thank you and good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    October 25
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    Very nice Hazel...nice rhyme and flow. You shared your heart well in this write.
    Blessings to you! Pam


  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    October 24

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    Great rhythm with clear, strong emotion. The "in general" line threw me off a bit but it's a passionate write. I hope he reciprocates these feelings now or someday.

    • ScottishPrincess silver member
      October 24
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      Thank you Mark so good to hear from you...I will edit that "in general " part and sort it...I hope he will reciprocate these feelings someday soon myself.


  • God of Thunder
    October 24

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    Passionate write. I can feel the emotion pouring from it. You have truly stated your feelings very well.

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