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Liquid Life (Ecstacy)


Liquid life
just a drop
on the end
of a lollipop.

Lick it up
take a sip
see it gleam
upon the lip.

Lots of life
in that one drop
life would come
dare it to stop.

Liquid life
fills me now
I wont say where
nor even how.

Author notes

A friend was teaching me formed poetry. So I decided to make up a "form" of my own. *wicked grinz*

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  • Beret55 silver member
    October 25

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    mmmmmmmmmmmmmm I love your mind. hehe
    "Lick it up , take a sip". mmmmmmmmmmmm
    My kind od woman. hehe