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fragile emotions

Me?
alive,
but alone,
watched after,
but unloved,
the burden on society,
that gets heavier everyday,
im invisible to the naked eye
and seen only by pity.
how am I?
i am myself.

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Written April 12th, 2004

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  • Bungalow Bill
    February 8, 2006
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    Very reflective and honest poem