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little red

youth in the blush of rouge,
a flower to match the beauties she holds

she shines bright against the everyday bustle
who hide behind parasols
lest they be freckled;
more concerned with fashion
than the joy of red cheeks
which she personifies with ease


taking in the warmth of sun,
she sells flowers not for sparkle of gold
but to spread a little color
in a monochrome world.


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  • UnbreakableSoul gold member
    October 25

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    Aww..this is beautifully written and I enjoyed reading this.
    Thank you so much iamlost and good luck to you!

    Geneva


  • B-n-h
    October 24

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    This poem is truly good!