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My Silence, A Weapon

They come at me
Yelling and screaming
What can I do
Except keep from talking

They get in my face
And scream what they want
Silence as my weapon
They wont get what they want

This life that I chose
I didnt realize how hard
It would be
To keep from being charred

So yes I say again
How far will it go
With silence as my weapon
Can I really follow the flow?

This life I must lead
As I walk my silent path
In the United States Marines
Trying to avoid
Their nasty wrath

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  • Rick Weston silver member
    November 5
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    an intriguing impression this work creates. well done.


  • Purush
    October 25

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    All the best in my context

    "This life that I chose
    I didnt realize how hard
    It would be to keep from
    To keep from being charred

    So yes I say again
    How far will it go
    With silence as my weapon
    Can I really follow the flow?

    This life I must lead
    As I walk my silent path
    In the United States Marines
    Trying to avoid
    Their nasty wrath"

    Quite amazing. neatly described with chosen words
    All the best in my context