Hair like chocolate velvet
Eyes jewels of the sea
Nature's beautiful creation
Katherine
Her laughter sweet and clear
Music for her dancing eyes
Her voice gentle like the rain
Katherine
Pure Katherine
She dances and sings like an angel
Brightens the earth like the sun
Always full of life
Katherine
Author notes
Pic courtesy of www.deviantart,com by_FireCaster
A contest entry
- a single name. by Kathraina.
675 points, ended November 11, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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beautiful!
You write about Katherine (pic. prompt) so well in your poem. I can feel the gentleness surrounding her.
Good luck in this contest!
Jeannette
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Very beautiful take on the prompt, I love the softness of the words you've penned here. Marvelously done!
bravo and thank you for entering
♥ kate -
wow
this katherine...you must know her address.....if yeah just toss it to me...or can I have just yours....my blush.....over which i am mooning -
Beautiful
This poem made me sigh in peace from the simple yet deep beauty of it. I can picture her perfectly in my mind. In my head I like to imagine this poem as being a gentle whisper between two lovers. Exquisite work.
Good luck in the contest.
Much love,
~Amanda~
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Lovely poem
I love your work and you bring about such beauty in life .Bravo
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Wonderfully written such a tribute
Sounding like a folk tune from the 60's maybe a Donavin tune. Great read bringing me back to my youth. Thanks for that. Best of luck again this is a winner in my book. Rick
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This poem has such a soft tone to it, Susan.
I particularly liked how you placed the name almost like a whisper or sigh in between each verse.
Very nicely done and best to you in the contest.
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Lovely words, lovely drawing! Katherine's a nice name (it's my cousin's name).
Best of Luck in this contest!
Love,
Maureen
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Both inner and outer beauty described. Well done.
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Oh, Susan, you create such a lively
word portrait of the subject,
capturing the essence of
"Nature's beautiful creation."
Kudos to you for a great piece!!
M-C
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what a lovely sketch!! a great dedication poem i think
pretty....
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Oh, how beautiful this poem is, really... Such an elegant write that makes me smile and sigh at how talented you are.
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Nice poem
I liked this one, seems Katherine is someone special to you. My favorite line is "She dances and sings like an angel" well said. I always like stopping by your area in AP.
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