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toying

I have been toying with an idea;
That the mind and heart,
(Intellect and emotion?)
(Conscious and subconscious?)
Are not fully integrated...
In exactly the same way
That a man cannot really understand a woman; understand a man
A repeating pattern
A theme of creation
A pathway one is to follow
To find deeper intended peace and communion

Complementary halves of an intended entity
Like the two halves of a scissors held together with a screw
When the screw is missing
Or lost
Either half can stab, slice, do work; credible tools
One an anvil, the other a shear
But return the screw
And magic happens
When the two work together
Dancing through paper
The color and weave of fabric

What things the heart hides from the mind
So it can survive the day...
What help the mind could be
If the heart could trust it...

What obstacles a man could conquer
Anchored in adoration

What things a woman could endure
Secure in unconditional love


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  • Rick Weston silver member
    November 17
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    so, toying with an idea and beautifully so - an excellent bit of reasoning shared in these toyed with lines. well done.


  • afirefly7
    November 1

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    heartwrenching

    I have not been on to read in a long time i am so glad tht you are my number ! fav...your words hit a place in my heart..an awesome a beautifully written piece


  • Net
    October 27
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    This is amazing. What a concept! brilliant work!


  • Camille Morin gold member
    October 24

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    The analogy of the scissors is perfect. I love the natural flow of your voice, as if you were relaxed and speaking to someone in the room...not trying to prove anything, just sharing a thought. And a beautiful thought at that.

    Great write.
    CM

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