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Heart

Sweet memories
that more than kill
trickling down on my heart.

Lost relationship
maybe it didn't exist
still I cry for what cant be.

Pulling heartstrings
telling me my actions
I seem to have no choice.

I look through a mirror at the reflection
do I like what I see?

I kiss the mirror and turn around
I can leave the memories behind.

Quick smile
I can love myself
and be who I'm meant to be.

No trace
I need no man
to make my life sweet.

There is hope in the sunrise today.

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  • it sounds like uyou had boyfriend problems and i have had many with girlfriend so i can relate i realy enjoyed this write


    • LillianEmrys
      October 25

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      Thank you, I have had my rough spots in relationships but I know that there is always hope for the one I'm meant to have.

  • Humm..your title here brings the true image of the story you mentioned in the peotry here..and the releief in the words makes this poetry very soothing as well..welldone...


  • Skawe
    October 24
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    Very Positive. Excellent Message. I really enjoy this poem

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