What does your heart tell you?*
to put out the melted candle
and forget our love?
or does it tell you to search for hope?
There never was much hope. Just a fool's hope*
a dream created
by false dreamers
carried by a breath of wind
onto memory,
but
I will not say, "Do not weep," for not all tears are an evil.*
not all tears unjust,
or shed in vainity,
cry and remmber
our brief flower
wilted after sunset.
Author notes
lassie come home ( i miss you...) i choose this format and the lotr quotes because i thought i could create a cool format and idea.....meh ( the * are the quotes) ( duh)
Written April 12th, 2004
A contest entry
- Quotes [[Some LOTR]] and Author Inspiration by Megan Dearest.
300 points, ended April 14, 2004, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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ooo...very deep. i like it. good write. good luck in the contest and God bless!
~jessilynn11
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this is pretty awesome. i liked that you used more than one quote since it wasn't required. lol, i miss lassie too. well this was very orginal and i liked it. good luck.
Meg -
Good use of quotes, I like what you did. Good luck in the contest.
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