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they hurt me bad, not so you can see
there was pain in my heart, pain aimed at me

holding my head high with stiff upper lip
but once in my street, my facade slips

the tears start to flow rolling down my cheeks
sobbing uncontrollably when mommy speaks

finally there, safe, loving and warm
my safest haven in this teenage storm

that feeling of security I tried to create too
for my own children's happiness whilst they grew

a home is important, it should feel whole
and be open and welcome for any one's soul

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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I was a teenager, it was tough and a horrible time but always, always my home was there, how my mother created it. The security and love I felt there I tried to show in my own home, according to my kids I succeeded in that

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  • poisonivystar4
    October 27
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    The concept of a happy teenager is a myth.


    • dutch2lips gold member
      October 27
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      it is that, glad i was lucky enough to have caring parents, ive been on here long enough ( and have read more then enough) to know i am lucky
      thank you


  • Griswold silver member
    October 26

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    The contest has closed due to filling up I would appreciate your start/finish to this when you can... Scott