I just hate it when we say goodnight.
You are my rising star.
You are my light.
The world is not in black and white.
Para usted cruzaria el mar.
I don't want to say goodnight.
Even when we have a fight
I won't let myself be far,
My rising star,my gorgeous light.
When I was blind you gave me sight
Gave me a world when I lived in a jar;
Please don't make me say goodnight.
Running through parks,flying a kite
Singing songs while in your car
Defining everything "us",we create light.
You gave me day when I owned night
Bandaged my bruises and my scars
I never want to say goodnight.
You are my world--don't turn off my light.
Author notes
ah.yes.another villanelle.its becoming my favorite artistic form
Written April 12th, 2004
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it IS your birthday!!!hey,i love you!
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now who is this about.... IT's MY BIRTHDAY!! :-D
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I really liked this...it had an awesome flow. It was beautifully written, and I love villanelles...i just can't write them myself. great write, thanks for sharing.
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