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Glimpsed

Look closely
At the rainbow’s
Edge
You’ll
See the Sun
Rise
On the
Other Side
Of the planet.

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Enjoyed the pondering muchly!

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 14
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    this is good very good and witty I enjoyed!!!!

  • abu nuwas
    October 27

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    Pretty..

    IF it were symbolic, one could read it as a (very much) abbreviated version of "Say not the struggle nought availeth"

    • Well that comment led me to a most certainly, brilliantly beautiful piece of poetry - so thank you very much - for that and the comment!

      ya All~Ways, ~ Jan ~

  • Smile!!!!!

    Short, but truly amazing!!!! Muchas gracias for this piece of goodness!!!!


  • awannabepoet
    October 25

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    Oh I like this little beauty, wonderful piece of poetry.



  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 25
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    short but sweet and oh so true GOD help us if it fails to rise one day bless you sweet one


  • John BoSox
    October 24

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    Very good work on this..You are to be commended

    John


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 24

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    very interesting take on the prompt thank you for taking the time to pen for me Hugs Angel♥

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