Look closely
At the rainbow’s
Edge
You’ll
See the Sun
Rise
On the
Other Side
Of the planet.
Author notes
Enjoyed the pondering muchly!
A contest entry
- 8 for 8 picture prompt quickie.. by AngelBellerose.
900 points, ended October 24, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is good very good and witty I enjoyed!!!!


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Pretty..
IF it were symbolic, one could read it as a (very much) abbreviated version of "Say not the struggle nought availeth"
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Well that comment led me to a most certainly, brilliantly beautiful piece of poetry - so thank you very much - for that and the comment!
ya All~Ways, ~ Jan ~
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Smile!!!!!
Short, but truly amazing!!!! Muchas gracias for this piece of goodness!!!!

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Oh I like this little beauty, wonderful piece of poetry.



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short but sweet and oh so true GOD help us if it fails to rise one day bless you sweet one


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Very good work on this..You are to be commended
John

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Thank you So much for the lovely comment! I quite enjoyed the process.
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very interesting take on the prompt thank you for taking the time to pen for me Hugs Angel♥


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Thank you for the contest, comment, and prompt. I guess what I'm saying is - props!
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