Illusions never cease
Mathematics make them think
that every particle was placed
by science in this space
No matter the proof of Him
they refuse to lower their chin,
fold their hands, and pray
thanking our Creator for this granted day
Seeing is not believing
The unseen rule this world
We live all as one
I am all, I am none
You are me and I am you,
all spirits intertwined
Maybe only I can see this
Maybe only I am blind
However.
I stick to my belief
No matter the 'truth'...
In some way you are me
For the millionth time, nice to meet you.
Author notes
i am still not sure if i like this poem...i wanted to say so much more! but it's hard for me to condense my thoughts to where it's not a novel- I TRY! haha
A contest entry
- The Power of Affirmations - Self Suggestions by drifting cloud.
1200 points, ended October 25, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
be honest. im not one to get mad at criticism...i just want help. how will i improve if you don't tell me what's wrong?? please and thank-you!!
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'The unseen rule this world' - We've all been fooled. For the millionth time, I meet you! Thank you for entering 'The Power of Affirmations' contest.
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