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♦♫♀☼I am going to let it free☼ ♀ ♫♦

I am lost,
and my heart and mind is trapped,
I am not desperate for care,
but I love life,
my understanding is caress
but it hurts so much all the time,
I ask you,
Who will love me for me?,
And yet, something inside me wants to resurrect my alter ego
And I, too,
I think I will set him free.

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  • Jamaicanqueens
    October 25

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    Wow boo, this poem really made me ponder about letting go of some of the things that i keep hiden from the world! This wuz an excellent write! Keep up the good work!


  • Storminbrenda silver member
    October 25

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    Nice write short and straight to the point just how I like them well done


    • caos-cordura
      October 25
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      thank you i actually wrote this poem in spanish and translated this to english