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It hurts

...It hurts when I look in the mirror
knowing I'll never be how I want to be

It hurts when I smile and laugh
forced to cover up what people cant see

It hurts when I hurt other people
just to cover up my fears inside

It hurts every single day Im living
wishing I could just fly up into the sky

It hurts everytime I think of things Ive lost
cause of my own stupidity and my own lies

But now the thing that kills me most
is just being me, knowing what I've become...

Author notes

you know to be honest i feel like iv given up i really cant be bothered tryna get better anymore :'(

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  • LesbianOfLove
    November 8

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    When you hurt like that, you hate yourself no matter what changes you make on the outside. It's tragic and heartfelt. Great work with this poem, keep writing!


  • evershine-90
    October 25

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    I can relate to this piece, your innermost feelings are perfectly depicted in this piece, a short poem yet it speaks thousand folds about what your going through. great job and take care everything has to get better someday live with that hope, at least that's what i'm doing right now..


  • Fallen-Thumper
    October 25

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    im sorr you feel like this hun
    im always here if you want to talk


  • I Messed Up
    October 25
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    awww so sorry u feel like thys...