I'd to give you
Everything I have
And I'd do anything
You asked me to
Just so you know where I stand
I don't want to loose this feeling
‘Cause I know I wont feel it again
And everything I say to you is true
Please say that you understand
Author notes
Prompt:
Iris - The Goo Goo Dolls
I hope you enjoy it 
A contest entry
- and I'd give up forever to touch you... by Unsigned.
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Give me the truth.
Comments
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Whoaaaaaa.... Iris just happens to be one of my most favorite songggggssssssssss.... Greatly enjoyed this simple and sweet piece. XD
-Dray
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Very smooth. I do love this poem and you did well with the prompt. I was a little confused with reading the first line however.
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Atleast I understand what you have in the heart..very true and very obvious feeling of the soul when you haves omeone in the heart my friend..love it..well done...
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Atleast I understand what you have in the heart..very true and very obvious feeling of the soul when you haves omeone in the heart my friend..love it..well done...
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