"lightening
moment frozen"
now...
...as it is...
~bowed head~
excepted future...
Author notes
nope
A contest entry
- Quickie...8 poets....15 minutes ......11 words... by islekine.
700 points, ended October 24, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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omg...I so love this...the whole outlay...it has such impact...makes me think of a really heavy black sky....btw is that an edward burton pic on ure profile...its sooo cool
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Wow brother
this really gave punch as I read this write
The added impact of thoughts
Well done on your HM
and nice to see you back
Julie
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This is wonderfully written and in only eleven words. Congratulations on the HM. You are amazing, Simon.
Joann
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very interesting structure, very thought-provoking poem! Hope all is well up north
~ Nicolette
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Wonderful
Very creative and well written. Best of luck in the contest
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LOL
I can tell right now...I am going to get better than I hoped for! thanks for entering! Best wishes always!
and
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wonderful poem you have penned, best of luck in the contest
Sean
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Thank Sean
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Powerful words Bubs! Wow! I love it! But you always say a lot with sooooo few words! Great job! I love it!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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