You walk around with your head held high
While everyone else hangs their head with a sigh
You think your so smart, you think your so wise
But you only make our anger rise
You tell us lectures and boss us around
And we sit there and listen without making a sound
You speak of nonsense and pointless things
You dont understand what frustration it brings
Your so ignorant and annoying
Your constant bitching is so boring
Just shut the fuck up and do us a favor
Cause listening to you is such hard labor
Im sick of your attitude and bitchy ways
Why dont you go to hell and there you can stay
What did you think
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I connected with this, it reminded me of my mother, lol. A nice write, some people say swearing in poems is trashy but I think if it's not overdone it lets the anger of the writer spill out of the poem more and I think you did a good job of it.
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yeah i dont think people should mind the swearing. i dont think you should hold back on anything when your writing about this paticular subject. plus i talk like a sailor lol. thanks for the comment =)
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