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Please

I see you everyday,
i watch you smile
I wish that you could stay,
at least for a while.

My heart cries,
i love your laugh,
I wipe my eyes
and split in half.

As you leave,
I am alone
just believe
I dont want you to go

I love your smile
It makes my heart soar
And your eyes
they catch me more.

Your soul glows,
through you eyes,
I love you so,
please realize

Why cant you feel the same,
i have loved you forever,
i need you here,
you are so clever

I love you, please love me!

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  • whyspr gold member
    October 24

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    This is a beautiful poem, good rhyme and heartfelt emotions.  Rhyme is my favorite poetry to read. Several stanzas stand out for me. I know Ive felt this way before myself.

    My heart cries,
    i love your laugh,
    I wipe my eyes
    and split in half.

    I love the image this paints.

    Great job on this one, keep up the good work.


  • PinkeyPromise
    October 24
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    this is amazeing i told u that u didnt suck


  • PerfectlyBroken
    October 24

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    Another excellent poem. My favorite line has to be "I love your smile It make my heart sore And you eyes they catch me more." A heart soring is a very good choice of words especially in this piece.

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