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Sweet Baby

Oh sweet baby
You'll never know how much I cried
To know you left us alone
Before I got to sing you a lullabye

Sweet baby of hers
I hope you rest in peace.
Don't look back
Don't listen to her weep.


Oh Sweet Baby
Somewhere in the sky.
Maybe you got lucky
At lwast now you won't cry.


Oh Sweet Baby
Your mommy will learn how to smile.
One day soon we'll meet.
&& you'll hear that song of mine.

Author notes

I was looking through last year's physics notes & listening to Billy Joel.


And somehow I got this.


Kinda sad. :/

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Comments

  • Master of Catz
    October 28
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    Awww cute

  • Somewhere in teh sky.
    check "the" out

    but yea it is sad, glad to see this is just something you came up with, keep it flowing


  • Coloured Skies
    October 25

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    Probably one of the most beautiful poems I've read all month.


  • SlowlyBreathing
    October 24
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    This got me to start crying...
    and I haven't stopped yet.
    Very good Lena, very good.