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Winter Skies

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Blossoms

which once perfumed

fragrant winds, reach outward.

As they ferment, watch Mars throughout

winter.

~*~

 

Author notes

 

 

 

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Cinquain

 

 

 

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PIC credit:

thebigfoto.com/mars-from-space

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments

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  • Peteskid gold member
    November 29
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    this is very creative and imaginative; as a star gazer it appeals to me that way too, how celestial bodies reflect our ideas, we project our ideas there too...PK


  • azure85 gold member
    November 7

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    Oh, an astro-cinquain! And so seasonal too, as that glorious red blossoms in the night sky where we can see it. Thank you so much for your cinquain, I enjoyed it very much.


  • whispersoftly
    November 5

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    beautiful

    This is a lovely piece of writing, thankyou. Keep writing Cheryl x


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 24

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    I also think this is quite beautiful, Brother Bear!
    Just speaks "softness"
    All the very best to you, hon!
    Love ya!
    Sis


  • Frogzter gold member
    October 24

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    A perfectly beautiful cinquain bear!


  • Stickboy
    October 24

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    a perfect and beautiful cinquain... best of luck to you in the contest
    Sean

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