I want to hold back my burning desire,
Trying to put out my unextinguishing fire
That burns me whenever you're around,
And leaves me wondering what makes it unsound !!
Delighted and overwhelmed,
Yet stabbed, though not killed !!
Fearing the concealed desire,
I go on with denying the fire.
Feeling locked to a pyre,
Wishing to be melt like a tyre!!
May this be the only tool,
May this bless my soul,
May I get over it all,
May I gather my pieces to a whole!
Not falling to that abyss,
Avoiding the ignorant and the endless,
Holding back the bullshit inside,
Restoring the strength to abide
My mind,
And it won't be denied,
The suffering you defied !
You shall burn as well,
So don't kiss and tell !!!
Author notes
If it makes sense at all, this's what I feel, maybe confusing, maybe irrelated, but I feel so many complicated contradicted feelings.... I'm a complex myself, lol...
A contest entry
- Do What You Do... JUST WRITE!!! by PerfectImperfection.
1200 points, ended November 20, 23 entries
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What do you think?
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Boy can I relate to contradictive feelings
and thoughts! My mind seems to be in
constant turmoil, it wears me out! So
this definitely made sense to me. Well
written. Good luck in the contest.(Sorry if contradictive isn't a word,
but it fits my thinking)
~Jeannie
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Thanks alot for your comment, I appreciate it alot
I know this state of Contradictive & I understand why you used it .
Thanks Again
Heba
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This shows a certain pain, allowing feeling to follow through that sequence of mixed emotion. Thank you for your entry!
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