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an aussie going to pasadena

it's a beautiful day,
i am going to see
a man i would live to die for
somewhere between
vertigo and a sunday
so far away

all my imaginings
where miracles perform
come together here
a pasadena night
full of roses

to share joy
to share him
listen and still learn

hopeful messages
masses hear
unconsciously,
subterranean

a subterfuge
with subtle interference
of words and a song

it's a beautiful day
don't let it get away

 

 

 

Author notes

'it's a beautiful day,
don't let it get away
touch me, take me to that other place
touch me, i know i'm not a hopeless case' (Bono)...in case you didn't know lol

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  • Mango Memories gold member
    October 29
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    Great. that songs in my head now. Hmf!


    • Cannonsfire
      October 29
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      lol I have no voice left to sing..2hrs and 21mins of Bono and my voice left with them to go to Vancouver and it's Thursday and I am home and it's only just coming back LOL


  • Nicolette gold member
    October 26

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    you very lucky woman! to be traveling in the USA and to see and hear U2...yes a beautiful day indeed. this is the stuff memories are made of

    ~ Nicolette


    • Cannonsfire
      October 26
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      Oh Nic, it was AWESOME I have no voice left, we created history by being part of the biggest single even ever in the Rose Bowl and Bono was at his finest, the stage was a space ship 360 degrees and we were third row from the front right near the stage ....It was a beautiful day

  • Rowan gold member
    October 25

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    sounds like a very beautiful day.


    • Cannonsfire
      October 25
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      Lol It will be, if Jin can manage to collect all the little melted pieces of me in time to go home afterwards lol it takes quite a bit of time to bring me back to sanity after it Who I am i kidding, I've never been completely anyway


  • smitaanand
    October 25

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    The write drips with love and romace and subtle shades of veiled sensuality and just a hint of passion peeping from beween the lines and not uttered rom the lips of seemingly innocent words.The excitment and anticipation are very much evident in the vese that seems filled with elixir of bliss unadulterated and without pretence.The verse tells a story in a very sweet manner of sharing a dream.Thanks for sharing this it was amazing and take care....


  • geckogirl silver member
    October 24

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    all your dreams come true again. love the words girlfriend


  • JinSays gold member
    October 24

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    Amen my sister...it is a beautiful day, huh?
    excited? whew.
    yep, me too...omg, I cant believe it, we're going to Pasadena, and we're seeing Bono, and Im never gonna get you home again.
    just remember the duxt tape...you're gonna be strapped down to the roof of the car....insert big sigh here
    love,
    jin


    • Cannonsfire
      October 24
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      lol better bring along a bucket, I usually end up a melted piece of butter when he sings with or without you, so you might have to pour me into it C


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 24

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    I am so jealoues, but most happy for you!!
    love your words Chez, yes to live to die for!!
    great lines!! yes and it will be a most beautiful
    day for you!! take lots of pics

    love to you

    Rend


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    October 24

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    Uh huh, have a nice time hun.

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