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The weight of your eyes

They say eyes are the window of the soul
a curtain that blocks the world out in person
I feel the weight expand upon me in vein
I have hidden terrible truths
to those who have placed their trust in me
currently I am tired and there is no one there to break my fall
my eyes are the only protection that we seek
only they have gone

Author notes

Eyes are like moving pictures even if you can not understand you can still see what is going on around you what is going on in the world today. Not if you are blind the eye sight that you once have have been stolen. What ever the cause has robbed your eye sight a part of your souls and once your eye sight is gone it is hard to return within your eyes. Because the picture will tune in and out from your view. Eye sight is very important in a human being life. Please take care of your sight as much as possible or you may have to live in a world of lies and fears forever.

 

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  • saseychik0688
    November 27
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    Good poem, nice flow...short, sweet & to the point...good luck in my contest.


  • Diminished Capacity gold member
    November 6

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    I would hate not having sight, there are so many beautiful things to see. You did a great job with this piece, thank you so much for entering it in my contest.

  • Judith Chandler
    October 24

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    No eyes! Then you would have to place your trust in what you hear and what you feel. Tricky. You've created an interesting write here.