My collar finalizes my title as "mine"
I'm yours and I know it,
but as long as it's you I'm fine,
tugging and pulling and stretching me thin,
i like being scraped and I like being battered,
your hands run cold down my spine,
making me arch,
making me whine,
god i didn't know I could scream like that,
fuck it hurt but damn i wanted more,
your fist in me
laying face down on the floor,
"Shut up my fucking darling or I'll give you more,"
but not just a warning,
a future action you had been waiting for,
fisting me harder and harder,
I want you so bad,
to just touch me gentle,
but I know if you did I would just want it harder.
with "oh gods" and "oh fucks" and "oh lords"
you spread your fingers
"shut up little bitch, this is the game i like playing"
your hand on my dick,
squeezing me senseless,
i can feel myself bleeding but I dont want you to stop,
"don't you cum little whore" rings in my ears,
but I like it like this, with your hand in my guts,
until you rip and you pull and it doesn't feel good anymore.
Now you're down at my level,
up in my face,
"sweet dreams slave boy you were nice while I had you."
A contest entry
- What Mistress Wants by sensualbutterfly.
950 points, ended October 31, 9 entries
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wow...
I have neve really had a hard time describing my feings over a poem... but ... I can say...wow... I really don't ave any words this time... It'crazy... but the poem in itself is very good and very well written...
My favorite part was:
I want you so bad,
to just touch me gentle,
I like this part because it shows that though you ant something you don't get it...because you know... it will only itensify...
Great poem...great write...amazing writer...
Always
Karlie
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holy molly a little rough play goin down here but hell its still steamy cool work indeed fiesty pair here
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wow...
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All I can say is wow! Erotica and darkness all in one...I am left a bit speechless! This was damn good! Thanks for the entry
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Thanks, truly... I liked it myself, but I thought I could do better... maybe I will try again later. This is the first erotic poem I've ever done lol so at least I tried.lol.
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