last rose
she bends slowly
with last breaths of summer
her bed is made, of fallen leaves
sleep tight
A contest entry
- Cinquaintly Fall by azure85.
1100 points, ended November 7, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
your suggestions are always welcomed
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very picturesque the words and the line breaks edge the reader to the peaceful conclusion, in a gentle way, like the rose, a gentle fall...PK
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thank you again for reading my humble words
im honored
when I get enough time to stay on longer ill return the favor
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Very beautiful cinquain that adds beauty to the images of the season as the gentle autumn gives way in a vibrancy of colors of poetry. Thank you so much.
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lovely
what a beautiful piece of writing, wonderful, keep writing Cheryl x -
And sleep she will until the Spring. Another wonder with few words! I love Autumn because it is the preperation for rebirth after a cold rest. Lovely! The best to you in the contest dear friend.
With Love &hbearts;
Renee
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yes, this is the way to go, on a bed of leaves....what a wonderful, peaceful cinquain!
~ Nicolette
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Beautiful
Excellent!
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ohhhh...ahhhhh...enough said...you're amazing
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Aw so soft and beautiful! X x
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