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Name Me

 

 

there's mush in my brain
can't think of a name
but hey what the hell
I'll play your family game
there'll be no fortune
nor any fame
I'm just an Aussie
than cannot be tamed

so here's the go
I'll go with the flow
call me whatever
let your family grow

 



 

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 30

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    Sassy Lassy?

    You'll always be a friend to me, no matter what wind may blow... or whatever your name is!! Best wishes to you always, and good luck in the contest!!
    Peace & Hugs,
    Cyn


  • Cup-a-Joe
    October 25

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    Wind Omen that's your name. You are blessing because you tame the wind.
    Nice poem Sue.


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 24

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    aww sweeties, you would bless each other so much,
    my untamed friend, isnt that the truth!!

    love and blessings

    *´¨)
    ¸.·´¸.·*´¨) ¸.·*¨)
    (¸.·´ (¸.·Rend~


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    October 24

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    Your poem is so cool
    I agree with "Cannonsfire" and "nature"

    "Gecko clan" a thought to nurture
    Yes, Yes, "Gecko clan" that name is grand
    the "untamed" one now has a new brand
    I am truly honored my Aussie sweet one
    I hope you and your friends have lotsa fun
    Suddenly, I am filled with glee
    dancing around yelling "Yippee"
    My family is growing fast
    to help those gloomy, cloudy days pass

    Thank you so much
    I hope to get my page started in the next week or so

    David

    PS: If you need me, you know where to find me


  • Cannonsfire
    October 24

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    I like the thought of the below comment...a gecko clan now there is an idea


  • nature
    October 24

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    All Plus: A Family Name

    Look for a naughty name,
    For the one that cannot be tamed,
    Be it a beast or an Aussie lizard;
    The family can't go with out a name.

    Hell this is no game,
    I do not seek fortune or fame,
    Mush my brain;
    But do give me a family name.

    Lol
    How about the Gecko clan;
    A true family Name.

    Agree that one can never be tamed in life which ever way one may want to think.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 24

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    l.o.l.

    nice lil rhyming run you did here GG! but no need to implore you'll be accepted i'm sure!

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