The wind was a-blowin' and was a tad cold
and Rocky Raccoon got so dreadfully bold.
These jeans were a-hangin' right near to the ground,
so he thought he'd climb up, have a good sniff around.
He snuggled right in, got a 'feel' of the place
and found that one leg fitted him like a brace.
So cosy and comfy he took a peep out,
this place was a treasure trove, surely, without doubt.
Some soft little hairs and a wee bit of fluff,
a wrapper, a twig and some other fine stuff.
Paw on that zipper and poor Rocky's distraught
for on those steel teeth his poor fur was now caught!
But a wriggle or two and the jeans gave a sway
and his paw that was caught popped right out of the way.
So he then snuggled down for a bit of a rest,
with these fine living quarters he was now quite obsessed!
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A contest entry
- Too Cute (Pic Prompt) by Frogzter.
1300 points, ended October 28, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Simply adorable. I enjoyed this one so much! Thanks for your entry and best wishes,
Frogz~ -
ha ha fabulous funny clever fits the prompt to a T! and how cute is he !
Good Luck
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This poem is sooo cute! it had me laughing out loud aswell!!
your rhyming was perfection, and you did an amazing job at stuffing this poem with character, well done & good luck!
Alice
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Wonderful
Oh my this is so cute and funny. You did great with it. Best of luck in the contest
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