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[ I close my eyes your there ]

I close my eyes your there
Your eyes
I’m glued on

Deep rich
Fire burning blue
Lips touching
Without warning

Our thoughts are one 
Hands dancing in circles

Touch so exciting
Chills running everywhere
Like a ripple in water

Heating up inside
Yet our
Bodies are cold at touch
Overwhelming

Desire feeling
To be our primal self’s







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  • jamesbliss
    October 27
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    Dam really nice, I liked the part where you said fire burning blue-- nice imagery