Where hate has flown and freedom flies
equality before all eyes
and flags of peace caress the skies
on promised earth that sighs.
And every creature 'pon the land
from mountaintops to ocean's sand,
will finally all understand
that all must help command.
For if the balance makes life heavy,
finally we'll break that levy.
Author notes
Word prompt: paradise
75 words or less
In a list
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie: Word Prompt - paradise by mgmc.
700 points, ended October 27, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Well Done Gaylene! Great structure as expected! A different take that inspires!
Very nicely written! Thanks much for this entry and all the best!
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promises of paradise to feed our hopes - nicely shared.
well done and good luck in the contest.
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Excellent
What a lovely write. And so very touching. Best of luck in the contest
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I love yor take on he prompt, it expresses it perfectly!
I also love how youre words create a sense of freedom while you read them.
Fantastic, good luck witht the contest!
Alice
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