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[whispers to you]

I'm whispering this to you because I'll blush if anyone else hears.
This love is the kind that can only be heard by your ears.

You make my heart pound and my knees shake.
I'll give you my heart, body & soul, if you agree to take.

Take all the flaws I have and see them as beautiful and pretty.
Take all my corny jokes and see them as clever and rather witty.

I chose you because I believe you're the best.
I need you because I believe you won't leave like the rest.

Understand me, and revive me.
Show me how to be the pretty girl I used to be.

Please tell me how to improve and to good enough for you.
I know it's hard to love so suddenly, but I know you feel it too.

When those butterflies start fluttering, I want you to know they're there.
And those gorgeous creatures are not going anywhere.

As long as I'm with you, I can learn to be happy again.
To dance freely, and go places I've never been.

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Written for Josh♥ (09-14-09)

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  • Dustandashes
    October 31
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    very sweet, enjoyed it muchly....i know....muchly is not a word.


  • TwoFacedPsycho
    October 27

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    I miss you too, my NerdGirl! I'll have to text you during art club today and set up a meeting if you're still close by. If you're not, I might cry (hey, that rhymed! ). TTYL

    This poem is so sweet. Brings back some crazy memories of my own . It's really nothing to whine about, but I do anyway. Love you and miss you.