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Aloneee

Help me, i can't stand it,
there's no one else around,
i can't just lie here in despair,
waiting to be found.

I can hear the screaming,
deep inside my head,
i can't stop it, not again,
i might as well be dead.

I'm just a girl,
who's heads held high,
but right down inside,
i want to break down and cry.

Turning all my friends from me,
saying i don't care,
i need them more than anything,
my minds just so unfair.

Why does this always happen,
why can't i stay the same,
why can't i just be nice for once,
it really is a shame.

So this will end and start again,
but i will be alone still,
deep inside my broken mind,
i will be left in peace till,
The ending of all time.

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This just flowed from my heart...i just felt like i had to put something down and the product was this...

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  • Denise 28
    November 18

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    Bravo

    So this will end and start again, but I will be alone stil... I love this line! I live this poem. You hit heartbreat an loneliness just right! Fantastic job!