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Generations

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a soft gentle touch
feels the warm pulse of guidance
of a calloused hand

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  • kareneisenlord gold member
    October 25

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    You described the picture adeptly with your words; the newborn clasping an elder's hand and feeling the warmth, security and guidance of an experienced hand there. Thank you!


  • Titus gold member
    October 24

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    calloused, now that's as good as me shaking hands with a navvie, but hey, I can feel what the baby feels, what power, yet observant power too.