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flight

vibrant
storm of color
flashes through crystal air

falling leaves form wings for changing
season




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  • azure85 gold member
    November 7

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    Good view of the seasons, from beyond the scene of fallen leaves to an upward glance at the migration of the birds and seasons. Thank you so much for your cinquain.


  • whispersoftly
    November 5

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    Beautiful

    This is beautiful, It is this sort of writing that keeps me coming back, thankyou! keep writing x Cheryl


  • Boris Plotz gold member
    October 24
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    lovely!